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freackytza
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mda pey...e compusa demult dar sper sa va placa
Without you…
I`m just a girl how`s telling you her feelings
But you are staying in my face and smiling
Thinking maybe that it`s a joke ,
Thinking maybe that I`m wrong
I saw you a long time ago
And I wanted to speak with you
Just to say „Hallo!”
And now I`m staying here
With all my fears in vine,
My heart is beating so fast
My muscles can`t relax.
And now I`m looking in your eyes
How beautiful they are…
You are looking in my eyes
How scared they are…
The rain is starting to fall
It seems like tears on your face
A flash of lighting is coming down
It`s brighten up your face
The weather is so furious
The rain become a storm
I`m looking at you for the last time
I`m trying to say the last word…
But I coudn`t…
You`ve dissapeared so fast
I`ve remained with my feelings
I`ve remained in my world
This world of dreams and pain
A world of fantasy and blood
A world where all I care is you
A world of mine…
Without you…
mai am cateva...dar vreau o parere despre prima...sa stiu daca sa continui :-s |
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Mia
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e frumoasa 
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lumea asta pare plina doar de prosti ce s-au iubit. 
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__Lauraa*
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| Trimis: 05/01/2008 23:46 Titlul subiectului: |
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freackytza
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| Trimis: 08/01/2008 21:14 Titlul subiectului: |
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pey....eram deprimata si simteam nevoia sa ma exprim cumva...
maybe nu e chiar reusita...dar m-am simtit moolt mai bine dupa ce am scris-o...fara sa mai mentionez ca plangeam in hohote 
Does anybody understand me ?
No one sees me crying ,
No one hears me screaming !
No one cares about my tears ,
No one know my fears…
It`s dark inside my soul ,
I can`t believe that you are gone
Crying , screaming your name in my dreams
Yes…dreams…there are my last believes…
Nothing new...
Everything like yesterday...
Everything like before...
Same feelings...
Nothing chanced...
And I`m wondering...
Can you feel what I feel ?
Can you hear my silent scream ?
Another page is tourning of ,
Another page of my life ,
Tomorrow is so close…
Minute by minute…second by second…
I`m wondering where are you now…
I`m wondering how far you are…
And now you know my story
I hope that you can understand
But if you don`t I`m really sory…
My eyes are bleadind ,
My soul is screaming…
For help...
I`m tired of thinking about the past
Please forgive me because I`m lost…
I`ve promised you that I will be strong
I tried to do the best I could
But I can`t breath for long…
Goodbye my love…
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All I want is you to be with me
Here I am
All these words they have lost their meaning
I just hope you hear my silent scream |
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lil'devil
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| Trimis: 08/01/2008 21:43 Titlul subiectului: |
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me like ur lyrics  ....ft marfa versurile ...bravo 
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Autumns~Monologue
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da,si mie mi plac!
keep up the good work! 
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purpple_dizzy
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sa stii ca prima este foarte frumoasa... are un fel de sentiment in ea...
ai reusit sa transmiti deosebit de bine ceea ce simti.
dar am o intrebare... tu dupa ce le scrii ce faci cu ele?
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__Lauraa*
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A doua ruleaza !
si prima.
dar a doua e mai frumoasa |
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freackytza
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| purpple_dizzy a scris: | sa stii ca prima este extrem de frumoasa... are un fel de sentiment in ea...
ai reusit sa transmiti foarte bine ceea ce simti.
dar am o intrebare... tu dupa ce le scrii ce faci cu ele? |
nimic...
le scriu pentru mine
ma simt mult mai bine dupa ce imi expun sentimentele pe o foaie
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purpple_dizzy
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am o idee de linie melodica la versurile tale 
o sa o fac si daca reusesc cumva sa o inreg ti-o tr
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freackytza
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| purpple_dizzy a scris: | am o idee de linie melodica la versurile tale
o sa o fac si daca reusesc cumva sa o inreg ti-o tr |
okay
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Here I am
All these words they have lost their meaning
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roxanna
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| Trimis: 17/02/2008 15:04 Titlul subiectului: sall |
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| f. frum versurile sunt profunte inteleg. te dedici f. mult cuvintelor |
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freackytza
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multzu fetele  
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Here I am
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I_Love_CoCo
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EE TALEE!!MIJTO CA POTI SA FACI RIMA IN ENGLEZA...NU'I CHIAR ASA DE USOR..
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freackytza
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| I_Love_CoCo a scris: | | EE TALEE!!MIJTO CA POTI SA FACI RIMA IN ENGLEZA...NU'I CHIAR ASA DE USOR.. |
eu fac rima mai usor in engleza decat in romana
am 4 ore de engleza pe saptamana ca sunt la profil Turism cu intensiv engleza
si dupa doua ore de engleza una dupa alta mi se pare urata romana
anyway...o sa mai compun cand mai am timp 
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Here I am
All these words they have lost their meaning
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Mia
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Foarte elegant , ai talent .
:] Mai poti lucra si o sa til dezvolti telentul si mai mult.
Mai astept sa vad ce mai scri
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lumea asta pare plina doar de prosti ce s-au iubit.
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~..Curcubeu..~
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Cat de frumos scrii
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omfg.
deci.
ador primele versuri.
sunt super xD
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